Last Call Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08
review-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08-genart-lc-dupont-2015-11-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-11-17
Requested 2015-10-28
Authors Ram R , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Victor Pascual , Parthasarathi Ravindran
I-D last updated 2016-05-31 (Latest revision 2016-04-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-11-18
review-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08-genart-lc-dupont-2015-11-18-00
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Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151112
IETF LC End Date: 20151117
IESG Telechat date: 20151203

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
  (very minor)
  - 3.1.1 figure 1 page 5: a= fingerprint1 -> a=fingerprint1

  - 7 page 9: comments,suggestions, -> comments, suggestions,

  - Authors' Addresses page 11: as the first two authors work at
   the same place one can expect exactly the same address (:-)

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr