Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcpmss-
review-ietf-tcpm-tcpmss-genart-lc-thomson-2012-05-24-00

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From: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson at gmail.com>
Date: 20 May 2012 19:34
Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcpmss-04
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Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-tcpmss-04
Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date: 2012-05-20
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Summary: This draft clarifies a point of potential confusion around
the use of the TCP MSS. ÂThe draft is ready for publication as an
informational RFC, with a couple of nits.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

Opinion... The draft seems a little long. ÂSection 4 contains the only
truly crucial point: namely the one made after the matrix. ÂThat
alone, plus the short description in Section 2, seems sufficient. The
appendix is excessive.

Section 6 does not contain security considerations. ÂIt need not
contain anything.

Sections 3 and 5 have extra indentation for their subsections.

The table in Section 4 has a wayward period.