Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-01
review-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-01-opsdir-lc-jiang-2015-02-17-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2015-02-23 | |
Requested | 2015-02-10 | |
Authors | Fei Zhang , Ruiquan Jing , Rakesh Gandhi | |
I-D last updated | 2015-02-17 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
by Russ Housley
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Genart Telechat review of -07 by Russ Housley Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Stephen Kent Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Sheng Jiang (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Lizhong Jin (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Sheng Jiang |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 07) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2015-02-17 |
review-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-01-opsdir-lc-jiang-2015-02-17-00
Dear all, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Intended status: Standards Track Summary: I found it is well written with no big concerns. The document is ready to be published. A minor comment lists below. Section 3.2 describes three scenarios. It also states "in each of the situations described above, both provisioning models are applicable. But, the description in 3.2.1 and 3.2.2 does not cover all three scenarios. It may leave some questions on the operational procedures of these undescribed scenarios. My guess is they are same or similar. Some clarification on this would be helpful. Best regards, Sheng