Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-20
review-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-20-genart-lc-housley-2019-05-02-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 22) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2019-05-15 | |
| Requested | 2019-05-01 | |
| Authors | Xufeng Liu , Igor Bryskin , Vishnu Pavan Beeram , Tarek Saad , Himanshu C. Shah , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios | |
| I-D last updated | 2019-05-02 | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -08
by Mahesh Jethanandani
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Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Melinda Shore (diff) Genart Last Call review of -15 by Russ Housley (diff) Genart Last Call review of -20 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -20 by Melinda Shore (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 20 (document currently at 22) | |
| Result | Not ready | |
| Completed | 2019-05-02 |
review-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-20-genart-lc-housley-2019-05-02-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-20 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2019-05-02 IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-15 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: Not Ready Major Concerns: See https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines. The Security Considerations section MUST follow the template provided on that web page, and the guidelines require normative references to [RFC5246] and [RFC6536], among others. These two RFCs do not appear in the references. Minor Concerns: None Nits: The TOC contains several lines where the heading goes past the column of page numbers. Reformatting would make this much easier to read.