Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp-20
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Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 24)
Type Telechat Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2025-04-01
Requested 2025-01-27
Authors Markus Amend , Anna Brunstrom , Andreas Kassler , Veselin Rakocevic , Stephen Johnson
I-D last updated 2026-01-07 (Latest revision 2025-04-29)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -17 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -17 by Russ Housley (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -17 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Artart Telechat review of -20 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/EsaHnHs-z0N1UNTo27e1UK29X_A
Reviewed revision 20 (document currently at 24)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2025-01-27
review-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp-20-artart-telechat-housley-2025-01-27-00
I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. Please treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.


Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp-20
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2025-01-27
IETF LC End Date: 2024-10-17
IESG Telechat date: 2025-04-03

Summary: Almost Ready

Thank you for addressing my previous comments.


Major Concerns:

Section 3.2.4: Since none of the Key Types is mandatory-to-implement, it
is possible that two implementations of this specification will not
interoperate.  I realize that the Key Type have very different security
implications.  Also, mandatory-to-implement does not make that Key Type
mandatory-to-use. Policy has a role too.

Section 8: The IANA registry indicates that Feature Number 10 was given
a temporary assignment.  I expected to see a similar temporary assignment
for Option Type 46.  This document seems to depend on that value being
assigned by IANA.


Minor Concerns:

None.


Nits:

Section 3.11.2: Please add white space between the adjacent paragraphs.

Section 8: s/Sect.  Section 3.1 specifies/Section 3.1 specifies/