Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07
review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-12-31-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-12-24 | |
| Requested | 2014-12-11 | |
| Authors | Michael Tüxen , Randall R. Stewart , Randell Jesup , Salvatore Loreto | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-12-31 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by
Francis Dupont
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Tom Taylor (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Benoît Claise |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-12-31
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| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2014-12-31 |
review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-12-31-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141224 IETF LC End Date: 20141224 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this" the term "should" is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword and SHOULD is better, or it is not and a different word should be used. Note I don't know the authors' intention so the best solution. Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr