Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07
review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-12-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-12-24
Requested 2014-12-11
Authors Michael Tüxen , Randall R. Stewart , Randell Jesup , Salvatore Loreto
I-D last updated 2017-11-15 (Latest revision 2015-01-24)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Benoît Claise
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-12-31
review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-12-31-00
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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20141224
IETF LC End Date: 20141224
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this"
  the term "should" is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword
  and SHOULD is better, or it is not and a different word should be used.
  Note I don't know the authors' intention so the best solution.

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr