Last Call Review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09
review-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09-genart-lc-krishnan-2014-10-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-10-27
Requested 2014-10-16
Draft last updated 2014-10-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Review review-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09-genart-lc-krishnan-2014-10-29
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Almost Ready
Review completed: 2014-10-29

Review
review-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09-genart-lc-krishnan-2014-10-29

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see


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).

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Document: draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/10/28
IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30


Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as Proposed 
Standard, but I do have a comment you may wish to consider.

* Sections 5.2 and 5.3

-> The document uses some non-documentation addresses (AFAIK) in some of 
the examples. e.g. 28.2.0.0/16 for an IPv4 prefix and 2600::/16 for an 
IPv6 prefix. Is it possible to rewrite these examples using reserved 
documentation addresses? Strangely enough, idnits does not seem to catch 
them either.

Thanks
Suresh