Last Call Review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09
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Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/10/28
IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30
Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as Proposed
Standard, but I do have a comment you may wish to consider.
* Sections 5.2 and 5.3
-> The document uses some non-documentation addresses (AFAIK) in some of
the examples. e.g. 220.127.116.11/16 for an IPv4 prefix and 2600::/16 for an
IPv6 prefix. Is it possible to rewrite these examples using reserved
documentation addresses? Strangely enough, idnits does not seem to catch