Last Call Review of draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo-01
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Request Review of draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-03-12
Requested 2020-02-13
Authors Mark Nottingham
I-D last updated 2020-03-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
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Document: draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2020-03-08
IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This very needed document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC with
few minor nits.

Major issues:
None.

Minor issues:
1) Line 116-117 states "This document uses ABNF [RFC5234], including by
reference the  following rules: ALPHA, DIGIT." Why RFC5234 APLHA and DIGIT
rules need to be specifically called out?

Nits/editorial comments:
1) Line 106   s/ike/like
2) Line 106  Expand CSRF on the first use (and possibly give an informative
reference to it).