Last Call Review of draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03
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Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-04-29
Requested 2015-04-02
Authors Simon Perreault , Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) , Senthil Sivakumar , Tom Taylor
I-D last updated 2019-04-26 (Latest revision 2015-06-16)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -03 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
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Request IETF Last Call review on draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Document: draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015-04-29
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-29

Summary: There are some minor issues in the draft that need to be fixed 
before publication as a Proposed Standard.

* Some objects and the their textual conventions vary only by case. 
There are three such instances

natv2SubscriberIndex and Natv2SubscriberIndex
natv2InstanceIndex and Natv2InstanceIndex
natv2PoolIndex and Natv2PoolIndex

* The natv2PoolRangeBegin and natv2PoolRangeEnd do not have an 
immediately preceding InetAddressType object as required by RFC4001.

Thanks
Suresh