Last Call Review of draft-thaler-iftype-reg-06
review-thaler-iftype-reg-06-genart-lc-yee-2019-11-09-00

Request Review of draft-thaler-iftype-reg
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-11-07
Requested 2019-10-10
Authors Dave Thaler, Dan Romascanu
Draft last updated 2019-11-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Peter Yee
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Tommy Pauly
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Melinda Shore
Assignment Reviewer Peter Yee
State Completed
Review review-thaler-iftype-reg-06-genart-lc-yee-2019-11-09
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/dap0XmH0Ucw5dtg_n9tR_2FveSE
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-11-09

Review
review-thaler-iftype-reg-06-genart-lc-yee-2019-11-09

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Document: draft-thaler-iftype-reg-06
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2019-11-09
IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-07
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This is a well-written draft that provides updated guidance for the IANA interface and tunnel type registries.  It was a pleasure to read: when a question arose in my mind, I invariably found it answered in the next paragraph.  The reasoning for the guidance given is well explained and clear.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Page 3, Section 3, item #2, 1st sentence:  Delete the first two commas.

Page 3, Section 3, item #3, 1st sentence: Delete the first two commas.

Page 7, Section 6.1, item #3, 2nd sentence: Delete the last comma.

Page 7, Section 6.1, item #4: Delete the space between iftype and the period.

Page 8, 3rd paragraph, Rationale (2): Change "transmision" to "transmission".

Page 10, 3rd bullet item: I suspect "xxxSomeTunnelTypeLabel" would make more sense here than "xxxSomeIfTypeLabel".