Last Call Review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
review-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2016-10-24-00

Request Review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-10-24
Requested 2016-09-26
Authors Brian Weis , Maik Seewald , Herb Falk
I-D last updated 2017-06-09 (Latest revision 2016-10-28)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Early review of -02 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9 by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-10-24
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Document: draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Oct-27-2016
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Oct-27-2016

This document is ready as an Proposed Standard.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 1

Nits:
1/ S1.2: Perhaps a ':' or a '-' to delimit the term being defined and
 the definition itself.

Thanks,

- vijay
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