Transfer dIGital cREdentialS Securely
charter-ietf-tigress-01

is it possible to be specific about the "share"? like what are we sharing? It is clear that we are transfering credential but "initiate a share" is not that clear.

# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-tigress-06

CC @larseggert

## Comments

### Paragraph 1
```
  The WG charter includes the definition and standardization of a protocol that
```
Since this *is* the WG charter, this text reads a bit odd.

### Paragraph 1
```
  Privacy goals include:
```
The text below talks about "share" when the text above talked about "transfer". Suggest to align the terminology.

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

#### Paragraph 5
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- * Aside from potentially the IP address, the relay server should not learn the
+ * Aside from network-level metadata, the relay server should not learn information about the
```

#### Paragraph 9
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- * Ensure the sender has intent to share (proof of the fact that the share
+ * Ensure the sender has the intent to share (proof of the fact that the share
+                        ++++
```

### Grammar/style

#### Paragraph 0
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nd or a family member. A private home owner may want to provide access to th
                                 ^^^^^^^^^^
```
This noun normally spelled as one word.

#### Paragraph 24
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form the credential transfer in a secure manner. The protocol will use appro
                             ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
```
Consider replacing this phrase with the adverb "securely" to avoid wordiness.

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool