A YANG Data Model for Microwave Topology
draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-12

Yes

John Scudder
Éric Vyncke
(Robert Wilton)

No Objection

Erik Kline
Jim Guichard
Murray Kucherawy
Orie Steele
Paul Wouters
Roman Danyliw
Warren Kumari
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
(Andrew Alston)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 10 and is now closed.

John Scudder
Yes
Comment (2024-02-13 for -10) Sent 
Thanks for this document. I have some minor comments below, that I hope may be helpful. Also, thanks to Éric for being special guest AD, and to Daniele for the shepherd write-up.

### Section 1.1, unused terms

MSDC is defined but only used once... prior to this section, and with in-line expansion already. So, I think the abbreviation can be removed.

Same for PNC.

### Section 1.2, incorrect xref

“A simplified graphical representation of the data model is used in chapter 3.1 of this document.”

RFCs don’t have “chapters”, they have “sections”, but more importantly this document doesn’t have a section (or chapter) 3.1. I guess you need to update your cross reference. Probably you mean Section 2.1?

### Appendices

Thank you for the clear diagrams, they’re very helpful. Just curious, what tool did you use to produce them? (Assuming the different renderings weren't hand-crafted that is.)
Éric Vyncke
Yes
Comment (2024-02-05 for -10) Not sent 
I am acting as the responsible AD, replacing John Scudder for this I-D. 
AD review was done and authors have replied and acted upon my review.
Erik Kline
No Objection
Jim Guichard
No Objection
Murray Kucherawy
No Objection
Comment (2024-02-14 for -10) Sent 
Section 1.1 defines "SNIR", though this term appears nowhere else in the document.
Orie Steele
No Objection
Paul Wouters
No Objection
Roman Danyliw
No Objection
Comment (2024-02-09 for -10) Sent 
Thank you to Joseph Salowey for the SECDIR review.

** Section 3.  The Security Considerations for writing to these nodes is discussed.  Would there any any circumstances where read access to these nodes would be problematic?
Warren Kumari
No Objection
Comment (2024-02-14 for -10) Not sent 
Nice catch on Rob's part!

Thank you for this document.
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
No Objection
Robert Wilton Former IESG member
(was Discuss) Yes
Yes (2024-03-05) Sent 
Thanks for addressing my concern.
Andrew Alston Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -10) Not sent