Advice to the Trustees of the IETF Trust on Rights to Be Granted in IETF Documents
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc5377bis-03

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 02 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana Yes

Roman Danyliw No Objection

(Alexey Melnikov; former steering group member) Yes

(Alissa Cooper; former steering group member) Yes

(Barry Leiba; former steering group member) Yes

Two nits in the Abstract (and, yes, I know the first one was there in the original):

   The Trustees of the IETF Trust accepts direction from the IETF
   regarding the rights to be granted.

As “The Trustees” is plural, the verb needs to be so as well: “accept”.

There’s a missing space before the last sentence.

(Benjamin Kaduk; former steering group member) Yes

(Adam Roach; former steering group member) No Objection

(Deborah Brungard; former steering group member) No Objection

(Martin Vigoureux; former steering group member) No Objection

(Mirja Kühlewind; former steering group member) No Objection

nit in sec 4.5: "the IETF intends to grant in the content of RFCS." -> RFCs with lower s

(Suresh Krishnan; former steering group member) No Objection

* Section 3

Since the [TRUST-LEGAL] reference already contains the URL, is the URL necessary inline in this section?