Static Context Header Compression (SCHC) over Sigfox Low-Power Wide Area Network (LPWAN)
draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-23
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2024-01-26
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23 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request closed, assignment withdrawn: Sarah Banks Last Call OPSDIR review |
2024-01-26
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23 | Gunter Van de Velde | Closed request for Last Call review by OPSDIR with state 'Team Will not Review Version': Cleaning up stale OPSDIR queue |
2023-07-19
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23 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to AUTH48-DONE from AUTH48 |
2023-07-03
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23 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to AUTH48 |
2023-06-20
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23 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to RFC-EDITOR from REF |
2023-06-12
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23 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to REF from EDIT |
2023-03-20
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23 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to EDIT from MISSREF |
2023-02-09
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23 | Tero Kivinen | Closed request for Last Call review by SECDIR with state 'Overtaken by Events' |
2023-02-09
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23 | Tero Kivinen | Assignment of request for Last Call review by SECDIR to Russ Mundy was marked no-response |
2023-02-06
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23 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to No IANA Actions from In Progress |
2023-02-06
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23 | (System) | RFC Editor state changed to MISSREF |
2023-02-06
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23 | (System) | IESG state changed to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent |
2023-02-06
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23 | (System) | Announcement was received by RFC Editor |
2023-02-06
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23 | (System) | IANA Action state changed to In Progress |
2023-02-06
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23 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent from Approved-announcement to be sent |
2023-02-06
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23 | Amy Vezza | IESG has approved the document |
2023-02-06
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23 | Amy Vezza | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2023-02-06
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23 | Amy Vezza | Ballot approval text was generated |
2023-02-05
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23 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-23.txt |
2023-02-05
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23 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2023-02-05
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23 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2023-02-04
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22 | (System) | Removed all action holders (IESG state changed) |
2023-02-04
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22 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement to be sent from IESG Evaluation::AD Followup |
2023-02-04
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22 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot approval text was generated |
2023-02-04
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22 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot approval text was generated |
2023-02-02
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22 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS feedback. ** This document’s stated goal per Section 1 is to “describe the recommended parameters, settings, and … [Ballot comment] Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS feedback. ** This document’s stated goal per Section 1 is to “describe the recommended parameters, settings, and modes of operation to be used when SCHC is implemented over a Sigfox LPWAN. The cited reference for “Sigfox” is: [sigfox-spec] Sigfox, "Sigfox Radio Specifications", . Visiting that URL shows that the Sigfox Radio specification is versioned. There is a v1.6/March 2022, v1.5/Feb 2020 and v1.4/Nov 2019. Does this SCHC profile apply to all of these versions? And future versions that will pointed to from this URL? The text should be cleared on applicability. |
2023-02-02
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22 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Roman Danyliw has been changed to No Objection from Discuss |
2023-01-23
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22 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-22.txt |
2023-01-23
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22 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2023-01-23
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22 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2023-01-20
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21 | (System) | Changed action holders to Éric Vyncke (IESG state changed) |
2023-01-20
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21 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed |
2023-01-20
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21 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
2023-01-20
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21 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-21.txt |
2023-01-20
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21 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2023-01-20
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21 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2023-01-09
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20 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot comment] # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18 CC @larseggert ## Comments ### Section 3.6.1.3.2, paragraph 8 ``` * WINDOW_SIZE: 7 (with a … [Ballot comment] # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18 CC @larseggert ## Comments ### Section 3.6.1.3.2, paragraph 8 ``` * WINDOW_SIZE: 7 (with a maximum value of FCN=0b110) ``` 0b110 is of course six - so are zero windows disallowed and the encoding is off by one? (Same comment for other encoded window sizes in the document.) ### Too many authors The document has seven authors, which exceeds the recommended author limit. Has the sponsoring AD agreed that this is appropriate? ## Nits All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. ### Typos #### Section 3.6.1.3.1, paragraph 11 ``` - The maximum SCHC Packet size is of 340 bytes. - --- ``` #### Section 4.2, paragraph 19 ``` - |<-Compoud ACK,W=0,1, C=0--| Bitmap W=0:1010110 + |<-Compound ACK,W=0,1, C=0--| Bitmap W=0:1010110 + + ``` #### Section 4.2, paragraph 19 ``` - |<-Compoud ACK,W=1,C=1 ----| C=1 + |<-Compound ACK,W=1,C=1 ----| C=1 + + ``` ### "Authors' Addresses", paragraph 6 ``` Unabiz - Sigfox is now a Unabiz technology ``` Is that really the name of the organization? ### URLs These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: * http://www.sigfox.com/ * http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack-09.txt ### Grammar/style #### Section 1, paragraph 4 ``` sing a provisioning protocol, by out of band means, or by pre-provisioning th ^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` Did you mean "out-of-band"? #### Section 3.3, paragraph 1 ``` ty. For this reason, when SCHC bi-directional services are used (e.g., Ack-on ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` This word is normally spelled as one. #### Section 3.3, paragraph 1 ``` All-1. The FCN is the tile index in an specific window. FCN and window numb ^^ ``` Use "a" instead of "an" if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. "a sentence", "a university". #### Section 3.6.1.3.1, paragraph 3 ``` six - so are zero windows disallowed and the encoding is off by one? (Same c ^^^^ ``` Use a comma before "and" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short). #### Section 3.7.2.2, paragraph 5 ``` ll-1 message Fragment Header contains a RCS of 4 bits to complete the two-byt ^ ``` Use "an" instead of "a" if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. "an article", "an hour". #### Section 3.7.2.3, paragraph 4 ``` er-Abort message header size is of 2 byte, with no padding bits. For the All- ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.2.3, paragraph 4 ``` he Sender-Abort message MUST be of 2 byte (only header with no padding). This ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.3.2, paragraph 2 ``` --------+ | 6 bits | 2 bits | 1 bit | 7 bit | 8 bit | 40 bits | next L2 W ^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "bit" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.3.3, paragraph 4 ``` er-Abort message header size is of 2 byte, with no padding bits. For the All- ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.3.3, paragraph 5 ``` he Sender-Abort message MUST be of 2 byte (only header with no padding). This ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool |
2023-01-09
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20 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Lars Eggert has been changed to No Objection from Discuss |
2023-01-05
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20 | (System) | Changed action holders to Laurent Toutain, Éric Vyncke, Juan-Carlos Zúñiga, Carles Gomez, Sandra Cespedes, Diego S. Wistuba La Torre, Sergio Aguilar, Julien Boite (IESG state … Changed action holders to Laurent Toutain, Éric Vyncke, Juan-Carlos Zúñiga, Carles Gomez, Sandra Cespedes, Diego S. Wistuba La Torre, Sergio Aguilar, Julien Boite (IESG state changed) |
2023-01-05
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20 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from IESG Evaluation |
2023-01-05
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20 | Robert Wilton | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Robert Wilton |
2023-01-05
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20 | Andrew Alston | [Ballot comment] Thanks for the work on this document. I to support both Roman and Lars's discussion points. |
2023-01-05
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20 | Andrew Alston | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Andrew Alston |
2023-01-04
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20 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot comment] I support the DISCUSSes of Lars and Roman. I too was confused by some security aspects. One sigfox spec said it uses AES128 … [Ballot comment] I support the DISCUSSes of Lars and Roman. I too was confused by some security aspects. One sigfox spec said it uses AES128 in CBC mode, while another said AES128 in CTR mode. |
2023-01-04
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20 | Paul Wouters | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Paul Wouters |
2023-01-04
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20 | Elwyn Davies | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Not Ready. Reviewer: Elwyn Davies. |
2023-01-04
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20 | Elwyn Davies | Request for Last Call review by GENART Completed: Not Ready. Reviewer: Elwyn Davies. Sent review to list. Submission of review completed at an earlier date. |
2023-01-04
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20 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot comment] Like Alvaro, and others, I support Lars' DISCUSS position. I'd also like to thank Bo for the OpsDir review ( https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18-opsdir-lc-wu-2022-12-24/ ), and … [Ballot comment] Like Alvaro, and others, I support Lars' DISCUSS position. I'd also like to thank Bo for the OpsDir review ( https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18-opsdir-lc-wu-2022-12-24/ ), and the authors for working well together to address these; I think that they improved the document. Thanks all! |
2023-01-04
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20 | Warren Kumari | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Warren Kumari |
2023-01-04
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20 | Amanda Baber | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2023-01-03
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20 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot comment] Thanks for working on this specification. Thanks to Colin Perkins for the TSVART review. I am also supporting Lars's discuss. I regret on … [Ballot comment] Thanks for working on this specification. Thanks to Colin Perkins for the TSVART review. I am also supporting Lars's discuss. I regret on not getting explanations for more than 5 authors in this specification. I noticed that the introduction section says "This document describes the recommended parameters, settings, and modes of operation", I believe this specification, with the use of normative language "MUST" and likewise, is more than recommending. I would just remove the word "recommended" from the specific sentence. |
2023-01-03
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20 | Zaheduzzaman Sarker | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Zaheduzzaman Sarker |
2023-01-03
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20 | Alvaro Retana | [Ballot comment] [I support Roman's DISCUSS.] |
2023-01-03
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20 | Alvaro Retana | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alvaro Retana |
2023-01-02
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20 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
2023-01-02
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20 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-20.txt |
2023-01-02
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20 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2023-01-02
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20 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2023-01-02
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19 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot comment] Thanks for a good shepherd writeup. I support Lars's DISCUSS position. Similarly, I would like to confirm that the naming of seven authors … [Ballot comment] Thanks for a good shepherd writeup. I support Lars's DISCUSS position. Similarly, I would like to confirm that the naming of seven authors (exceeding the RFC Editor guidance of five) is necessary here. General: * Since this document is specifically about SCHC over Sigfox, shouldn't [sigfox-spec] be normative? Abstract: * You don't need to give the SCHC RFC number twice. Sections 3.5.1.3.1, 3.5.1.3.2, 3.5.1.4: * When might an implementer do something other than what this SHOULD says? Or ought this be a MUST? Section 3.5.2: * Same issue with the first SHOULD in this section. (The second one is fine.) |
2023-01-02
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19 | Murray Kucherawy | Ballot comment text updated for Murray Kucherawy |
2023-01-02
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19 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot comment] I support Lars's DISCUSS position. Similarly, I would like to confirm that the naming of seven authors (exceeding the RFC Editor guidance of … [Ballot comment] I support Lars's DISCUSS position. Similarly, I would like to confirm that the naming of seven authors (exceeding the RFC Editor guidance of five) is necessary here. General: * Since this document is specifically about SCHC over Sigfox, shouldn't [sigfox-spec] be normative? Abstract: * You don't need to give the SCHC RFC number twice. Sections 3.5.1.3.1, 3.5.1.3.2, 3.5.1.4: * When might an implementer do something other than what this SHOULD says? Or ought this be a MUST? Section 3.5.2: * Same issue with the first SHOULD in this section. (The second one is fine.) |
2023-01-02
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19 | Murray Kucherawy | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Murray Kucherawy |
2022-12-29
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19 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot discuss] ** Section 3.2. Messages sent from the Device to the Network are delivered by the Sigfox network (NGW) to the Network … [Ballot discuss] ** Section 3.2. Messages sent from the Device to the Network are delivered by the Sigfox network (NGW) to the Network SCHC C/D + F/R through a callback/API with the following information: ... * Device Geolocation (optional) In some circumstances, sending device location information is privacy sensitive. Please provide a pointer or summary text for the relevant security considerations. ** Section 5. The security considerations describe a collection of security services such as authenticity, confidentiality, and replay protection for the Sigfox protocol. However, none of these appear to be described in in this document and no references are provided. -- Per confidentiality: although not cited, Section 5.3 (“Applicative payload encryption”) of https://storage.googleapis.com/public-assets-xd-sigfox-production-338901379285/6f9a5819-5aa1-4fde-a2b7-eb1ad5193829.pdf (which is the PDF link describing v1.6 of the SigFoxx protocol from the URL cited at [sigfox-spec]) says: [snip start] Payload encryption is a procedure that encrypts the payload of applicative messages over the air, in both uplink and downlink communication. It uses an AES128 algorithm in mode CTR with an encryption key (Ke), unique per end-point. The procedure is specified in a dedicated Sigfox specification document. [snip end] What is the “dedicated Sigfox specification”? -- Per the “The radio protocol authenticates and ensures the integrity of each message” is that described in Section 3.8 of [sigfox-spec]? Please describe these security mechanisms or cite them. |
2022-12-29
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19 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot comment] I support the DISCUSS position of Lars Eggert. ** This document’s stated goal per Section 1 is to “describe the recommended parameters, settings, … [Ballot comment] I support the DISCUSS position of Lars Eggert. ** This document’s stated goal per Section 1 is to “describe the recommended parameters, settings, and modes of operation to be used when SCHC is implemented over a Sigfox LPWAN. The cited reference for “Sigfox” is: [sigfox-spec] Sigfox, "Sigfox Radio Specifications", . Visiting that URL shows that the Sigfox Radio specification is versioned. There is a v1.6/March 2022, v1.5/Feb 2020 and v1.4/Nov 2019. Does this SCHC profile apply to all of these versions? And future versions that will pointed to from this URL? The text should be cleared on applicability. |
2022-12-29
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19 | Roman Danyliw | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Roman Danyliw |
2022-12-27
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19 | Amanda Baber | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from Version Changed - Review Needed |
2022-12-27
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19 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-19.txt |
2022-12-27
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19 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-12-27
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19 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-12-26
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18 | Erik Kline | [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for {doc-rev} CC @ekline * I support Lars' DISCUSS topic. I think things pencil out okay, but the … [Ballot comment] # Internet AD comments for {doc-rev} CC @ekline * I support Lars' DISCUSS topic. I think things pencil out okay, but the bulleted text format makes it nontrivial to see which bullets contribute to the header and which bullets are additional text pertaining to the mode described in the given section. ## Nits ### S3.1 * s/which then forward/which then forwards/, I suspect ### S3.2 * Suggest moving Figure 2 after its discussion paragraph. As currently placed, it mislead me into thinking that Figure 2 was an explanatory depiction of the L2 word size (which of course it's not =). ### S3.6.1.2 * s/can be increase when/can be increased when/ ### S3.6.1.5 * s/be comprised of less than/comprise fewer than/ or s/be comprised of less than/be composed of fewer than/ |
2022-12-26
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18 | Erik Kline | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Erik Kline |
2022-12-24
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18 | Bo Wu | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR Completed: Has Nits. Reviewer: Bo Wu. Sent review to list. |
2022-12-22
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18 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot discuss] # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18 CC @larseggert ## Discuss ### Section 3.6.1.3.1, paragraph 11 ``` When using the Single-byte SCHC … [Ballot discuss] # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18 CC @larseggert ## Discuss ### Section 3.6.1.3.1, paragraph 11 ``` When using the Single-byte SCHC Header for Uplink Fragmentation, the Fragmentation Header MUST be of 8 bit size, and it is composed as follows: * RuleID size: 3 bits * DTag size (T): 0 bit * Fragment Compressed Number (FCN) size (N): 5 bits * As per [RFC8724], in the No-ACK mode the W (window) field is not present. * Regular tile size: 11 bytes * All-1 tile size: 0 to 10 bytes * Inactivity Timer: Application-dependent. The default value is 12 hours. * RCS size: 5 bits ``` The fragmentation header fields in this list add up to much more than 8 bit, some are zero, and for the inactivity timer, no encoded length is given at all? Many similar lists in this document have similar issues. |
2022-12-22
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18 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot comment] ## Comments ### Section 3.6.1.3.2, paragraph 8 ``` * WINDOW_SIZE: 7 (with a maximum value of FCN=0b110) ``` 0b110 is of … [Ballot comment] ## Comments ### Section 3.6.1.3.2, paragraph 8 ``` * WINDOW_SIZE: 7 (with a maximum value of FCN=0b110) ``` 0b110 is of course six - so are zero windows disallowed and the encoding is off by one? (Same comment for other encoded window sizes in the document.) ### Too many authors The document has seven authors, which exceeds the recommended author limit. Has the sponsoring AD agreed that this is appropriate? ## Nits All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. ### Typos #### Section 3.6.1.3.1, paragraph 11 ``` - The maximum SCHC Packet size is of 340 bytes. - --- ``` #### Section 4.2, paragraph 19 ``` - |<-Compoud ACK,W=0,1, C=0--| Bitmap W=0:1010110 + |<-Compound ACK,W=0,1, C=0--| Bitmap W=0:1010110 + + ``` #### Section 4.2, paragraph 19 ``` - |<-Compoud ACK,W=1,C=1 ----| C=1 + |<-Compound ACK,W=1,C=1 ----| C=1 + + ``` ### "Authors' Addresses", paragraph 6 ``` Unabiz - Sigfox is now a Unabiz technology ``` Is that really the name of the organization? ### URLs These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: * http://www.sigfox.com/ * http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack-09.txt ### Grammar/style #### Section 1, paragraph 4 ``` sing a provisioning protocol, by out of band means, or by pre-provisioning th ^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` Did you mean "out-of-band"? #### Section 3.3, paragraph 1 ``` ty. For this reason, when SCHC bi-directional services are used (e.g., Ack-on ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` This word is normally spelled as one. #### Section 3.3, paragraph 1 ``` All-1. The FCN is the tile index in an specific window. FCN and window numb ^^ ``` Use "a" instead of "an" if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. "a sentence", "a university". #### Section 3.6.1.3.1, paragraph 3 ``` six - so are zero windows disallowed and the encoding is off by one? (Same c ^^^^ ``` Use a comma before "and" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short). #### Section 3.7.2.2, paragraph 5 ``` ll-1 message Fragment Header contains a RCS of 4 bits to complete the two-byt ^ ``` Use "an" instead of "a" if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. "an article", "an hour". #### Section 3.7.2.3, paragraph 4 ``` er-Abort message header size is of 2 byte, with no padding bits. For the All- ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.2.3, paragraph 4 ``` he Sender-Abort message MUST be of 2 byte (only header with no padding). This ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.3.2, paragraph 2 ``` --------+ | 6 bits | 2 bits | 1 bit | 7 bit | 8 bit | 40 bits | next L2 W ^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "bit" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.3.3, paragraph 4 ``` er-Abort message header size is of 2 byte, with no padding bits. For the All- ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. #### Section 3.7.3.3, paragraph 5 ``` he Sender-Abort message MUST be of 2 byte (only header with no padding). This ^^^^ ``` Possible agreement error. The noun "byte" seems to be countable. ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool |
2022-12-22
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18 | Lars Eggert | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Lars Eggert |
2022-12-20
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18 | Éric Vyncke | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2023-01-05 |
2022-12-20
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18 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot has been issued |
2022-12-20
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18 | Éric Vyncke | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Éric Vyncke |
2022-12-20
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18 | Éric Vyncke | Created "Approve" ballot |
2022-12-20
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18 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for Writeup |
2022-12-20
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18 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot writeup was changed |
2022-12-20
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18 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-18.txt |
2022-12-20
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18 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-12-20
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18 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-12-20
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17 | Colin Perkins | Request for Last Call review by TSVART Completed: Ready. Reviewer: Colin Perkins. Sent review to list. |
2022-12-20
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17 | (System) | IESG state changed to Waiting for Writeup from In Last Call |
2022-12-19
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17 | Jean-Michel Combes | Request for Last Call review by INTDIR Completed: On the Right Track. Reviewer: Jean-Michel Combes. Sent review to list. |
2022-12-15
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17 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to Version Changed - Review Needed from IANA OK - No Actions Needed |
2022-12-15
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17 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-17.txt |
2022-12-15
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17 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-12-15
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17 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-12-14
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16 | (System) | IANA Review state changed to IANA OK - No Actions Needed from IANA - Review Needed |
2022-12-14
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16 | David Dong | (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: The IANA Functions Operator has reviewed draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-16, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We … (Via drafts-lastcall@iana.org): IESG/Authors/WG Chairs: The IANA Functions Operator has reviewed draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-16, which is currently in Last Call, and has the following comments: We understand that this document doesn't require any registry actions. While it's often helpful for a document's IANA Considerations section to remain in place upon publication even if there are no actions, if the authors strongly prefer to remove it, we do not object. If this assessment is not accurate, please respond as soon as possible. For definitions of IANA review states, please see: https://datatracker.ietf.org/help/state/draft/iana-review Thank you, David Dong IANA Services Specialist |
2022-12-14
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16 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Sarah Banks |
2022-12-14
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16 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Sarah Banks |
2022-12-14
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16 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Bo Wu |
2022-12-14
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16 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Bo Wu |
2022-12-13
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16 | Behcet Sarikaya | Request for Last Call review by IOTDIR Completed: Almost Ready. Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya. Sent review to list. |
2022-12-12
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16 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Last Call review by TSVART is assigned to Colin Perkins |
2022-12-12
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16 | Magnus Westerlund | Request for Last Call review by TSVART is assigned to Colin Perkins |
2022-12-10
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16 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Russ Mundy |
2022-12-10
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16 | Tero Kivinen | Request for Last Call review by SECDIR is assigned to Russ Mundy |
2022-12-10
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16 | Bernie Volz | Request for Last Call review by INTDIR is assigned to Jean-Michel Combes |
2022-12-10
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16 | Bernie Volz | Request for Last Call review by INTDIR is assigned to Jean-Michel Combes |
2022-12-09
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16 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-16.txt |
2022-12-09
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16 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-12-09
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16 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-12-08
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15 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Elwyn Davies |
2022-12-08
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15 | Jean Mahoney | Request for Last Call review by GENART is assigned to Elwyn Davies |
2022-12-08
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15 | Tim Chown | Assignment of request for Last Call review by OPSDIR to Tim Chown was rejected |
2022-12-07
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15 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Tim Chown |
2022-12-07
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15 | Gunter Van de Velde | Request for Last Call review by OPSDIR is assigned to Tim Chown |
2022-12-06
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15 | Ines Robles | Request for Last Call review by IOTDIR is assigned to Behcet Sarikaya |
2022-12-06
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15 | Ines Robles | Request for Last Call review by IOTDIR is assigned to Behcet Sarikaya |
2022-12-06
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15 | Ines Robles | Assignment of request for Last Call review by IOTDIR to Bruce Nordman was rejected |
2022-12-06
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15 | Ines Robles | Request for Last Call review by IOTDIR is assigned to Bruce Nordman |
2022-12-06
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15 | Ines Robles | Request for Last Call review by IOTDIR is assigned to Bruce Nordman |
2022-12-06
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15 | Éric Vyncke | Requested Last Call review by IOTDIR |
2022-12-06
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15 | Éric Vyncke | Requested Last Call review by INTDIR |
2022-12-06
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15 | Amy Vezza | IANA Review state changed to IANA - Review Needed |
2022-12-06
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15 | Amy Vezza | The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2022-12-20): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: ana@ackl.io, anaminaburo@gmail.com, draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox@ietf.org, evyncke@cisco.com, lp-wan@ietf.org … The following Last Call announcement was sent out (ends 2022-12-20): From: The IESG To: IETF-Announce CC: ana@ackl.io, anaminaburo@gmail.com, draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox@ietf.org, evyncke@cisco.com, lp-wan@ietf.org, lpwan-chairs@ietf.org Reply-To: last-call@ietf.org Sender: Subject: Last Call: (SCHC over Sigfox LPWAN) to Proposed Standard The IESG has received a request from the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area Networks WG (lpwan) to consider the following document: - 'SCHC over Sigfox LPWAN' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2022-12-20. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract The Static Context Header Compression and fragmentation (SCHC) specification (RFC8724) describes a generic framework for application header compression and fragmentation modes designed for Low Power Wide Area Network (LPWAN) technologies. The present document defines a profile of SCHC (RFC8724) over Sigfox LPWAN, and provides optimal parameter values and modes of operation. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. |
2022-12-06
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15 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to In Last Call from Last Call Requested |
2022-12-06
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15 | Amy Vezza | Last call announcement was changed |
2022-12-05
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15 | Éric Vyncke | Last call was requested |
2022-12-05
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15 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot approval text was generated |
2022-12-05
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15 | Éric Vyncke | Ballot writeup was generated |
2022-12-05
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15 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup |
2022-12-05
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15 | Éric Vyncke | Last call announcement was generated |
2022-12-05
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15 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-15.txt |
2022-12-05
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15 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-12-05
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15 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-12-03
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14 | (System) | Changed action holders to Éric Vyncke (IESG state changed) |
2022-12-03
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14 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed |
2022-12-03
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14 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-14.txt |
2022-12-03
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14 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-12-03
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14 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-11-22
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13 | Ana Minaburo | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. Technical Summary: This document describes the use of SCHC (Static context Header Compression) compression and fragmentation rules for RFC 8724 and RFC 8824 over the SIGFOX technology. Working Group Summary: This document was discussed at several LPWAN interim meetings. There was never any form of opposition against it. This I-D uses the new compound-ack fragmentation mode described in a new doc. Shepherd: Ana Minaburo Responsible Area Director: Eric Vyncke ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? It's more of the latter. Sigfox solution has been developed by a group of 5-6 people very active people who implement open source code and proprietary stacks for SCHC. The group has accepted the solution they bring in this I-D. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was a global approval. Discussion centered on two slight issues: First, the first version of this document included the description of a new fragmentation mode and the use of SCHC compression and fragmentation over SigFox technology. The group decided to split this I-D into two documents. Thereby today, the group works on the draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox and draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. The second issue is the non-use of DTag over SIGFOX technology. The RFC8724 does not forbid this possibility, so it should not matter. But the DTag size (T) indicates interleaving and might be supported or not. The non-use of DTag means that there is only one SCHC packet on the air at a time, you must wait until the inactivity timer to send another packet. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? The newest implementation is under “The SCHC over Sigfox Project.” in github (https://github.com/schc-over-sigfox). Also, there are some based implementations in: Server code: https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schc-sigfox Device code (LoPy4): https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schcFox Furthermore, a simulator can be found here: https://github.com/wituwitu/WySCHC ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No such thing 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Do not apply 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No such thing 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No such thing ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Certainly. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I could not find one relevant here. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard, to ensure interoperation among implementations. Datatracker state attributes are correct. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Yes, and there's no IPR against this document. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. There are seven authors, most of them from Academia. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) All is good now. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All good. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? Yes, as the initial I-D had been split, it refers to the second document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. The draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack document is in last call at the WG. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No IANA considerations; this specification describes how to use SCHC over Sigfox. It does not have new functionalities or formats. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2022-11-16
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13 | Éric Vyncke | AD review done: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/lp-wan/aqalAm0rP7R2FyWgyoOWGozQXvY/ |
2022-11-16
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13 | (System) | Changed action holders to Laurent Toutain, Éric Vyncke, Juan-Carlos Zúñiga, Carles Gomez, Sandra Cespedes, Diego S. Wistuba La Torre, Sergio Aguilar, Julien Boite (IESG state … Changed action holders to Laurent Toutain, Éric Vyncke, Juan-Carlos Zúñiga, Carles Gomez, Sandra Cespedes, Diego S. Wistuba La Torre, Sergio Aguilar, Julien Boite (IESG state changed) |
2022-11-16
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13 | Éric Vyncke | IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from Publication Requested |
2022-11-15
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13 | Pascal Thubert | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. Technical Summary: This document describes the use of SCHC (Static context Header Compression) compression and fragmentation rules for RFC 8724 and RFC 8824 over the SIGFOX technology. Working Group Summary: This document was discussed at several LPWAN interim meetings. There was never any form of opposition against it. This I-D uses the new compound-ack fragmentation mode described in a new doc. Shepherd: Ana Minaburo Responsible Area Director: Eric Vyncke ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? It's more of the latter. Sigfox solution has been developed by a group of 5-6 people very active people who implement open source code and proprietary stacks for SCHC. The group has accepted the solution they bring in this I-D. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was a global approval. Discussion centered on two slight issues: First, the first version of this document included the description of a new fragmentation mode and the use of SCHC compression and fragmentation over SigFox technology. The group decided to split this I-D into two documents. Thereby today, the group works on the draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox and draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. The second issue is the non-use of DTag over SIGFOX technology. The RFC8724 does not forbid this possibility, so it should not matter. But the DTag size (T) indicates interleaving and might be supported or not. The non-use of DTag means that there is only one SCHC packet on the air at a time, you must wait until the inactivity timer to send another packet. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? The newest implementation is under “The SCHC over Sigfox Project.” in github (https://github.com/schc-over-sigfox). Also, there are some based implementations in: Server code: https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schc-sigfox Device code (LoPy4): https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schcFox Furthermore, a simulator can be found here: https://github.com/wituwitu/WySCHC ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No such thing 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Do not apply 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No such thing 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No such thing ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Certainly. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I could not find one relevant here. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard, which makes sense for such content. Datatracker state attributes are correct. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Yes, and there's no IPR against this document. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. There are seven authors, most of them from Academia. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) All is good now. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All good. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? Yes, as the initial I-D had been split, it refers to the second document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No IANA considerations; this specification describes how to use SCHC over Sigfox. It does not have new functionalities or formats. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2022-11-15
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13 | Pascal Thubert | IETF WG state changed to Submitted to IESG for Publication from WG Document |
2022-11-15
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13 | Pascal Thubert | IESG state changed to Publication Requested from I-D Exists |
2022-11-15
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13 | (System) | Changed action holders to Éric Vyncke (IESG state changed) |
2022-11-15
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13 | Pascal Thubert | Document is now in IESG state Publication Requested |
2022-10-10
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13 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-13.txt |
2022-10-10
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13 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-10-10
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13 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-10-07
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12 | Ana Minaburo | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. Technical Summary: This document describes the use of SCHC (Static context Header Compression) compression and fragmentation rules for RFC 8724 and RFC 8824 over the SIGFOX technology. Working Group Summary: This document was discussed at several LPWAN interim meetings. There was never any form of opposition against it. This I-D uses the new compound-ack fragmentation mode described in a new doc. Shepherd: Ana Minaburo Responsible Area Director: Eric Vyncke ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? It's more of the latter. Sigfox solution has been developed by a group of 5-6 people very active people who implement open source code and proprietary stacks for SCHC. The group has accepted the solution they bring in this I-D. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was a global approval. Discussion centered on two slight issues: First, the first version of this document included the description of a new fragmentation mode and the use of SCHC compression and fragmentation over SigFox technology. The group decided to split this I-D into two documents. Thereby today, the group works on the draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox and draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. The second issue is the non-use of DTag over SIGFOX technology. The RFC8724 does not forbid this possibility, so it should not matter. But the DTag size (T) indicates interleaving and might be supported or not. The non-use of DTag means that there is only one SCHC packet on the air at a time, you must wait until the inactivity timer to send another packet. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? The newest implementation is under “The SCHC over Sigfox Project.” in github (https://github.com/schc-over-sigfox). Also, there are some based implementations in: Server code: https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schc-sigfox Device code (LoPy4): https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schcFox Furthermore, a simulator can be found here: https://github.com/wituwitu/WySCHC ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No such thing 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Do not apply 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No such thing 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No such thing ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Certainly. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I could not find one relevant here. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard, which makes sense for such content. Datatracker state attributes are correct. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Yes, and there's no IPR against this document. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. There are seven authors, most of them from Academia. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) All is good now. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All good. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? Yes, as the initial I-D had been split, it refers to the second document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No IANA considerations; this specification describes how to use SCHC over Sigfox. It does not have new functionalities or formats. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
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12 | Ana Minaburo | # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among … # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents * This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. Technical Summary: This document describes the use of SCHC (Static context Header Compression) compression and fragmentation rules for RFC 8724 and RFC 8824 over the SIGFOX technology. Working Group Summary: This document was discussed at several LPWAN interim meetings. There was never any form of opposition against it. This I-D uses the new compound-ack fragmentation mode described in a new doc. Shepherd: Ana Minaburo Responsible Area Director: Eric Vyncke ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? It's more of the latter. Sigfox solution has been developed by a group of 5-6 people very active people who implement open source code and proprietary stacks for SCHC. The group has accepted the solution they bring in this I-D. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? There was a global approval. Discussion centered on two slight issues: First, the first version of this document included the description of a new fragmentation mode and the use of SCHC compression and fragmentation over SigFox technology. The group decided to split this I-D into two documents. Thereby today, the group works on the draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox and draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. The second issue is the non-use of DTag over SIGFOX technology. The RFC8724 does not forbid this possibility, so it should not matter. But the DTag size (T) indicates interleaving and might be supported or not. The non-use of DTag means that there is only one SCHC packet on the air at a time, you must wait until the inactivity timer to send another packet. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? The newest implementation is under “The SCHC over Sigfox Project.” in github (https://github.com/schc-over-sigfox). Also, there are some based implementations in: Server code: https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schc-sigfox Device code (LoPy4): https://github.com/saguilarDevel/schcFox Furthermore, a simulator can be found here: https://github.com/wituwitu/WySCHC ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. No such thing 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. Do not apply 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No such thing 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No such thing ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? Certainly. 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? I could not find one relevant here. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Proposed Standard, which makes sense for such content. Datatracker state attributes are correct. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. Yes, and there's no IPR against this document. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. All good on that front. 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) All is good now. 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. All good. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? None. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. None. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? Yes, as the initial I-D had been split, it refers to the second document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-compound-ack. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. No. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). No IANA considerations; this specification describes how to use SCHC over Sigfox. It does not have new functionalities or formats. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. None. [1]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/ [2]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html [3]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html [4]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools [5]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html [6]: https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics [7]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79 [8]: https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ [9]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html [10]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97 [11]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html [12]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5 [13]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1 [14]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2 [15]: https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview [16]: https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [17]: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/ |
2022-08-01
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12 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-12.txt |
2022-08-01
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12 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-08-01
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12 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-07-25
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11 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-11.txt |
2022-07-25
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11 | Sergio Aguilar | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Sergio Aguilar) |
2022-07-25
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11 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-06-17
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10 | Sergio Aguilar | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-10.txt |
2022-06-17
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10 | (System) | New version approved |
2022-06-17
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10 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Julien Boite , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes … Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Julien Boite , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes , Sergio Aguilar , lpwan-chairs@ietf.org |
2022-06-17
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10 | Sergio Aguilar | Uploaded new revision |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | Changed consensus to Yes from Unknown |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | Intended Status changed to Proposed Standard from None |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | This document now replaces draft-zuniga-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox instead of None |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | Notification list changed to ana@ackl.io, anaminaburo@gmail.com from ana@ackl.io because the document shepherd was set |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | Document shepherd changed to Ana Minaburo |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | Notification list changed to ana@ackl.io because the document shepherd was set |
2022-05-13
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09 | Pascal Thubert | Document shepherd changed to Ana Minaburo |
2022-02-22
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09 | Sandra Cespedes | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-09.txt |
2022-02-22
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09 | (System) | New version approved |
2022-02-22
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09 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes , Sergio Aguilar … Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes , Sergio Aguilar , lpwan-chairs@ietf.org |
2022-02-22
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09 | Sandra Cespedes | Uploaded new revision |
2021-10-24
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08 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-08.txt |
2021-10-24
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08 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-10-24
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08 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes , Sergio Aguilar |
2021-10-24
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08 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2021-07-10
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07 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-07.txt |
2021-07-10
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07 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-07-10
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07 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes , Sergio Aguilar |
2021-07-10
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07 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2021-06-11
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06 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-06.txt |
2021-06-11
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06 | (System) | New version approved |
2021-06-11
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06 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Diego Torre , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain , Sandra Cespedes , Sergio Aguilar |
2021-06-11
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06 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2021-02-22
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05 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-05.txt |
2021-02-22
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05 | (System) | New version accepted (logged-in submitter: Juan-Carlos Zúñiga) |
2021-02-22
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05 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2020-11-02
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04 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-04.txt |
2020-11-02
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04 | (System) | New version approved |
2020-11-02
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04 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain |
2020-11-02
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04 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2020-07-13
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03 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-03.txt |
2020-07-13
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03 | (System) | New version approved |
2020-07-13
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03 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain |
2020-07-13
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03 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2020-05-22
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02 | Éric Vyncke | Shepherding AD changed to Éric Vyncke |
2020-05-16
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02 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-02.txt |
2020-05-16
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02 | (System) | New version approved |
2020-05-16
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02 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Carles Gomez , Juan Zuniga , Laurent Toutain |
2020-05-16
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02 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2020-05-07
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01 | (System) | Document has expired |
2019-11-04
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01 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-01.txt |
2019-11-04
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01 | (System) | New version approved |
2019-11-04
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01 | (System) | Request for posting confirmation emailed to previous authors: Laurent Toutain , Carles Gomez , Juan Zuniga |
2019-11-04
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01 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |
2019-10-28
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00 | (System) | Document has expired |
2019-04-26
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00 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | New version available: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-sigfox-00.txt |
2019-04-26
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00 | (System) | WG -00 approved |
2019-04-25
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00 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Set submitter to "Juan Carlos Zuniga ", replaces to (none) and sent approval email to group chairs: lpwan-chairs@ietf.org |
2019-04-24
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00 | Juan-Carlos Zúñiga | Uploaded new revision |