Remote Network Monitoring Management Information Base Version 2
draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-05
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2006-03-30
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05 | Dan Romascanu | Shepherding AD has been changed to Dan Romascanu from Bert Wijnen |
2005-12-08
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05 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent by Amy Vezza |
2005-12-05
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05 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent |
2005-12-05
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05 | Amy Vezza | IESG has approved the document |
2005-12-05
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05 | Amy Vezza | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2005-12-02
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05 | (System) | Removed from agenda for telechat - 2005-12-01 |
2005-12-01
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05 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to Approved-announcement to be sent from IESG Evaluation by Amy Vezza |
2005-12-01
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05 | Alex Zinin | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alex Zinin by Alex Zinin |
2005-12-01
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05 | Allison Mankin | [Ballot comment] Shouldn't a MIB going to Draft Standard normatively reference RFC 2438, the BCP about MIBs advancing in the standards track? |
2005-12-01
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05 | Allison Mankin | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Allison Mankin by Allison Mankin |
2005-11-30
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05 | David Kessens | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for David Kessens by David Kessens |
2005-11-30
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05 | Jon Peterson | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jon Peterson by Jon Peterson |
2005-11-30
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05 | Margaret Cullen | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Margaret Wasserman by Margaret Wasserman |
2005-11-30
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05 | Mark Townsley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Mark Townsley by Mark Townsley |
2005-11-30
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05 | Sam Hartman | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Sam Hartman by Sam Hartman |
2005-11-29
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05 | Bill Fenner | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Bill Fenner by Bill Fenner |
2005-11-29
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05 | Bert Wijnen | [Ballot comment] To Scott Hollenbeck: Yes, http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFC2021-Implementation.txt is the implementation report, as was also listed in the IETF Last Call. To address comment from Brian … [Ballot comment] To Scott Hollenbeck: Yes, http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFC2021-Implementation.txt is the implementation report, as was also listed in the IETF Last Call. To address comment from Brian Carpenter, I added the following: Notes to RFC-Editor: In abstract, pls change: OLD: This document obsoletes RFC 2021 and the RMON2-MIB module contained in this memo obsoletes the RMON2-MIB module at RFC3273 level. NEW: This document obsoletes RFC 2021, updates RFC 3273 and contains a new version of the RMON2-MIB module. |
2005-11-29
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05 | Bert Wijnen | [Ballot comment] TO Scott Hollenbeck: Yes, http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFC2021-Implementation.txt is the implementation report, as was also listed in the IETF Last Call. |
2005-11-28
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05 | Ted Hardie | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ted Hardie by Ted Hardie |
2005-11-28
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05 | Russ Housley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Russ Housley by Russ Housley |
2005-11-25
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05 | Brian Carpenter | [Ballot comment] (from Gen-ART review by Harald Alvestrand) Note: Perhaps try to make it clear to the RFC Editor that this document obsoletes both RFC … [Ballot comment] (from Gen-ART review by Harald Alvestrand) Note: Perhaps try to make it clear to the RFC Editor that this document obsoletes both RFC 2021 and RFC 3273 - this wasn't blindingly obvious to me until I understood that RFC 3273 (Proposed in 2002) contained the pieces that were added to 2021 in order to create the complete object that we're considering for approval. |
2005-11-25
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05 | Brian Carpenter | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Brian Carpenter by Brian Carpenter |
2005-11-23
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05 | Scott Hollenbeck | [Ballot comment] is this the implementation report?: http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFC2021-Implementation.txt |
2005-11-23
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05 | Scott Hollenbeck | [Ballot comment] Implementation report? |
2005-11-23
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05 | Scott Hollenbeck | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Scott Hollenbeck by Scott Hollenbeck |
2005-11-15
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead by Bert Wijnen |
2005-11-15
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-11-15 from 2005-11-10 |
2005-11-15
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Note field has been cleared by Bert Wijnen |
2005-11-13
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05 | (System) | State has been changed to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from In Last Call by system |
2005-11-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | [Note]: 'IETF Last Call ends Nov 13th' added by Bert Wijnen |
2005-11-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2005-12-01 by Bert Wijnen |
2005-11-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-11-10 from 2005-08-10 |
2005-11-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Bert Wijnen |
2005-11-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Ballot has been issued by Bert Wijnen |
2005-11-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Created "Approve" ballot |
2005-10-25
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05 | Michelle Cotton | IANA Last Call Comments: As described in the IANA Considerations section, we understand this document to have NO IANA Actions. |
2005-10-20
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05 | Amy Vezza | Last call sent |
2005-10-20
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05 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to In Last Call from Last Call Requested by Amy Vezza |
2005-10-20
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Last Call was requested by Bert Wijnen |
2005-10-20
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::AD Followup by Bert Wijnen |
2005-10-20
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05 | (System) | Ballot writeup text was added |
2005-10-20
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05 | (System) | Last call text was added |
2005-10-20
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05 | (System) | Ballot approval text was added |
2005-10-05
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05 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-05.txt |
2005-08-22
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05 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed |
2005-08-22
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04 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-04.txt |
2005-08-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from Expert Review by Bert Wijnen |
2005-08-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Had some off-line discussions with Steve Waldbusser. Also there was one last comment posted to rmonmib mailing list to which I have seen no reaction … Had some off-line discussions with Steve Waldbusser. Also there was one last comment posted to rmonmib mailing list to which I have seen no reaction yet. I am waiting for a new revision and I pinged Steve (again) today. Bert |
2005-08-10
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-08-10 from 2005-07-26 |
2005-07-26
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Doc looks good, but I wonder about this: This document may not be modified, and derivative works of it may not be created, … Doc looks good, but I wonder about this: This document may not be modified, and derivative works of it may not be created, except to publish it as an RFC and to translate it into languages other than English other than to extract section 6 as-is for separate use. which shows up on the front page. I also see: !! Missing citation for Informative reference: P154 L018: [RFC3414] !! Missing citation for Informative reference: P154 L024: [RFC3415] And I get a SYNTAX error on: trapDestAddress OBJECT-TYPE SYNTAX OCTET STRING MAX-ACCESS read-create STATUS deprecated DESCRIPTION "The address to send traps on behalf of this entry. If the associated trapDestProtocol object is equal to ip(1), the encoding of this object is the same as the snmpUDPAddress textual convention in RFC 3417 "Transport Mappings for the Simple Network Management Protocol(SNMP)" [RFC3417]: -- for a SnmpUDPAddress of length 6: -- -- octets contents encoding -- 1-4 IP-address network-byte order -- 5-6 UDP-port network-byte order change double quote to single quote? And there is a TOC at the start and at the end of the doc I am asking author/editor and WG chair how they want to address the above |
2005-07-26
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-07-26 from 2005-07-21 |
2005-07-26
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to Expert Review from AD Evaluation::AD Followup by Bert Wijnen |
2005-07-26
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Doc looks good, but I wonder about this: This document may not be modified, and derivative works of it may not be created, … Doc looks good, but I wonder about this: This document may not be modified, and derivative works of it may not be created, except to publish it as an RFC and to translate it into languages other than English other than to extract section 6 as-is for separate use. which shows up on the front page. I also see: !! Missing citation for Informative reference: P154 L018: [RFC3414] !! Missing citation for Informative reference: P154 L024: [RFC3415] |
2005-07-26
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-07-26 from 2005-07-21 |
2005-07-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Change Notice email list have been change to ietf@andybierman.com; waldbusser@nextbeacon.com from abierman@cisco.com; waldbusser@nextbeacon.com |
2005-07-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-07-21 from 2005-01-24 |
2005-07-20
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05 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed |
2005-07-20
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03 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-03.txt |
2005-01-24
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from AD Evaluation::AD Followup by Bert Wijnen |
2005-01-24
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Revised ID has been promised. |
2005-01-24
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2005-01-24 from 2004-11-04 |
2004-11-04
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Andy has issued another WG Last Call, ends on nov 10th |
2004-11-04
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2004-11-04 from 2004-09-12 |
2004-10-07
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05 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed |
2004-10-07
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02 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-02.txt |
2004-09-06
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Checking with Steve Waldbusser and WG if we can expect any progress on this. |
2004-09-06
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2004-09-12 from 2004-08-12 |
2004-08-12
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from AD Evaluation by Bert Wijnen |
2004-08-12
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Change Notice email list have been change to abierman@cisco.com; waldbusser@nextbeacon.com from abierman@cisco.com |
2004-08-12
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2004-08-12 from 2004-07-15 |
2004-07-15
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05 | Bert Wijnen | AD review comments posted to rmonmib wg list: -----Original Message----- From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) Sent: donderdag 15 juli 2004 16:52 To: Steve Waldbusser (E-mail) Cc: … AD review comments posted to rmonmib wg list: -----Original Message----- From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) Sent: donderdag 15 juli 2004 16:52 To: Steve Waldbusser (E-mail) Cc: RMON WG (E-mail) Subject: AD review of: draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-01.txt This took far too long. Applogies for that. But here we go. more or less serious - Seems the REVISION dates have not been copied properly. smidiff tells me: ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:74 [3] {revision-removed} revision `2002-07-08 00:00' removed ./RMON2-MIB:71 [5] {revision-added} warning: revision `2004-02-14 15:00' added ./RMON2-MIB:78 [5] {revision-added} warning: revision `2001-10-23 15:00' added The MIB module at ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/mibs/current.mibs/rmon2.mib is the one that we are (supposedly) updating. It has the 28 july 2002 date, not an octover 2001 date. Steve, did you get that out of a private copy of this MIB? - I think the REVISION clause SHOULD contain more explicitly the changes as they are also described in section 12 - Maybe somewhere in the doc we should also state that the RMON2-MIB module at RFC3273 level, which can be found at ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/mibs/current.mibs/rmon2.mib is now obsoleted. I guess we need to replace that one with this one (once the RFC is published). We should probably make it clear in this RFC-to-be that that is what we will do? Just so it is clear. - smidiff tells me: ./RMON2-MIB:3860 [3] {range-added} size `(0..255)' added to type `ControlString' I guess that this has been thought out and is OK. I see that the size limitiation was always used whenever the TC was used (in this MIB). We do not know about possible use by other MIB modules, do we? Anyway, my biggest concern is that I see nothing of that explanation/justification anywhere in the document. Not in the TC itself, not in the REVISION clause. - smidiff tells me: ./RMON2-MIB:298 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `protocolDirID' replaces type 'OctetString' ./RMON2-MIB:298 [3] {range-added} size `(4..128)' added to type used in `protocolDirID' It seems as if you added a SIZE (4..128) Again, without any explanation anywhere. - Same for several others: ./RMON2-MIB:325 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `protocolDirParameters' replaces type `OctetString' ./RMON2-MIB:325 [3] {range-added} size `(1..32)' added to type used in `protocolDirParameters' ./RMON2-MIB:1016 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `addressMapNetworkAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ./RMON2-MIB:1016 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `addressMapNetworkAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:1451 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlHostAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ./RMON2-MIB:1451 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlHostAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:1933 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlMatrixSDSourceAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:1953 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixSDSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:1933 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlMatrixSDSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:1950 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlMatrixSDDestAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:1970 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixSDDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:1950 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlMatrixSDDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2038 [5] {description-changed} warning: description of object definition `nlMatrixDSEntry' changed ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2059 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixDSEntry' ./RMON2-MIB:2081 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlMatrixDSSourceAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2099 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixDSSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2081 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlMatrixDSSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2099 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlMatrixDSDestAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2116 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixDSDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2099 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlMatrixDSDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2462 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlMatrixTopNSourceAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2489 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixTopNSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2462 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlMatrixTopNSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2480 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `nlMatrixTopNDestAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2509 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `nlMatrixTopNDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2480 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `nlMatrixTopNDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:2604 [5] {description-changed} warning: description of object definition `alHostEntry' changed ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2634 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `alHostEntry' ./RMON2-MIB:2756 [5] {description-changed} warning: description of object definition `alMatrixSDEntry' changed ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2785 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `alMatrixSDEntry' ./RMON2-MIB:2876 [5] {description-changed} warning: description of object definition `alMatrixDSEntry' changed ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:2903 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `alMatrixDSEntry' ./RMON2-MIB:3285 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `alMatrixTopNSourceAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:3315 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `alMatrixTopNSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:3285 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `alMatrixTopNSourceAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:3303 [3] {to-implicit} implicit type for `alMatrixTopNDestAddress' replaces type `OctetString' ../ietf/RMON2-MIB:3333 [6] {previous-definition} info: previous definition of `alMatrixTopNDestAddress' ./RMON2-MIB:3303 [3] {range-added} size `(1..255)' added to type used in `alMatrixTopNDestAddress' - We may still want to consider (smilint tells me this): ./RMON2-MIB:5426: [5] {group-unref} warning: deprecated group `probeConfigurationGroup' is not referenced in this module ./RMON2-MIB:5461: [5] {group-unref} warning: current group `rmon1EthernetEnhancementGroup' is not referenced in this module ./RMON2-MIB:5470: [5] {group-unref} warning: deprecated group `rmon1TokenRingEnhancementGroup' is not referenced in this module I am mostly thinking about the one current group. Is it completely optional for at least one compliance? If so, we could add it there and state that. ./RMON2-MIB:105: warning: type `ZeroBasedCounter32' has no format specification ./RMON2-MIB:126: warning: type `LastCreateTime' has no format specification ./RMON2-MIB:146: warning: type `TimeFilter' has no format specification - trapDestTable has been deprecated. We normally put some text into the DESCRIPTION clause to explain WHY we did deprecate it. I even wonder if it would not be better to obsolete it (but probably should have brought that up earlier) - Same about other deprecated objects, groups, etc. - Page 6 states: Implementations of this MIB must also implement the system group of MIB-II [9] and the IF-MIB [10]. MIB-II may also mandate the implementation of additional groups. And referes to RFC1213 for MIB-II. Do we really want that, or would it be better to point to systemGroup of SNMPv2-MIB, RFC3418 ? Could in fact specify so im MODULE-Compliance. nits/admin - Although we DID have an extensive COPYRIGHT statement in the RFC3273 revision, I think we can now use the standard copyright statement as per our MIB Review Guidelines (sect 3.8): Copyright (C) The Internet Society (date). This version of this MIB module is part of RFC yyyy; see the RFC itself for full legal notices." -- RFC Ed.: replace yyyy with actual RFC number & remove this note - There should be no section numering for abstract and status and such (this is NOT new!) - abstract should state that this document obsoletes RFC 2021. - there should be NO citation to text in boilerplate, i.e. the [7] on the first page should not be there, and as a result reference [7] can (in fact should) go away. This rule is NOT new! - If a new rev gets done, then pls use new RFC3667/3668 boilerplates. - The document title is: Remote Network Monitoring Management Information Base Version 2 Using SMIv2 I think I would remove the "Using SMIv2". We've not been doing that anymore for quite a number of years now. - formatting is a bit weird on pages 142-144 Thanks, Bert |
2004-07-15
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2004-07-15 from |
2004-07-15
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation from Publication Requested by Bert Wijnen |
2004-04-01
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05 | Dinara Suleymanova | Draft Added by Dinara Suleymanova |
2003-08-29
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00 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-rmonmib-rmon2-v2-00.txt |