Last Call Review of draft-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01
review-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01-genart-lc-korhonen-2016-12-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-12-26 | |
| Requested | 2016-11-28 | |
| Authors | Julien ÉLIE | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-12-04 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -01
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David Mandelberg
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Genart Last Call review of -01 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Scott O. Bradner (diff) Genart Telechat review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) Genart Telechat review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jouni Korhonen |
| State | Completed Snapshot | |
| Review |
review-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01-genart-lc-korhonen-2016-12-04
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| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2016-12-04 |
review-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01-genart-lc-korhonen-2016-12-04-00
I think this document is ready for publication. I have comment, which is just a suggestion concerning document structure. Currently the updates/changes to RFC4642 are listed in Introduction. On the other hand there is a specific section for recommendations. I would move the updates/changes to RFC4642 into its own section just to make the document a bit more structured.