Last Call Review of draft-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01

Request Review of draft-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-12-26
Requested 2016-11-28
Authors Julien √ČLIE
Draft last updated 2016-12-04
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -01 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -01 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen 
State Completed
Review review-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01-genart-lc-korhonen-2016-12-04
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-12-04


I think this document is ready for publication.

I have comment, which is just a suggestion concerning document structure. Currently the updates/changes to RFC4642 are listed in Introduction. On the other hand there is a specific section for recommendations. I would move the updates/changes to RFC4642 into its own section just to make the document a bit more structured.