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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-segment-routing-header-22

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-segment-routing-header
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-08-20
Requested 2019-08-06
Authors Clarence Filsfils , Darren Dukes , Stefano Previdi , John Leddy , Satoru Matsushima , Daniel Voyer
I-D last updated 2019-08-14
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -22 by Liang Xia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -22 by Roni Even (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -22 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -22 by Will (Shucheng) LIU (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Will (Shucheng) LIU
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-segment-routing-header by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 22 (document currently at 26)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-08-14
Hi all,

I have reviewed draft-ietf-6man-segment-routing-header-22 as part of the
Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being
processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of
improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not
addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. 
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

“Segment Routing can be applied to the IPv6 data plane using a new
   type of Routing Extension Header called the Segment Routing Header.
   This document describes the Segment Routing Header and how it is used
   by Segment Routing capable nodes.”

My overall view of the document is 'Ready' for publication.

** Technical **


** Editorial **

As noted by author,   section 9 Implementation Status is to be moved removed
prior to publishing as an RFC. However, it may be still valuable to simplify
this part and put into appendix as a record.

Will (Shucheng LIU)