Last Call Review of draft-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-naming-
review-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-naming-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-10-04-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-10-04
Requested 2012-09-20
Authors Sam Hartman, Josh Howlett
Draft last updated 2012-10-04
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Richard Barnes
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Suresh Krishnan
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan 
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Review review-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-naming-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-10-04
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Review completed: 2012-10-04

Review
review-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-naming-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-10-04

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see


http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html

).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-naming-06.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2012/10/08
IESG Telechat date: 2012/10/11

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
I do have some minor comments you may wish to address.

Minor
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* Section 6.1:

This sentence is a bit difficult to read.

"This attribute is returned with the authenticated output of
GSS_Get_name_attribute true only when the mechanism can successfully
authenticated the SAML statement."

Suggest rewording to

"When GSS_Get_name_attribute is called, this attribute will be returned
with the authenticated output set to true only if the mechanism can
successfully authenticate the SAML statement."

(Is my interpretation correct?)

* Section 6.2:

s/encoding as "%20"/encoded as "%20"/

Thanks
Suresh