Telechat Review of draft-ietf-add-resolver-info-11
review-ietf-add-resolver-info-11-dnsdir-telechat-reid-2024-03-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-add-resolver-info |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | DNS Directorate (dnsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-04-02 | |
| Requested | 2024-03-03 | |
| Authors | Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Mohamed Boucadair | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-03-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Mallory Knodel
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Dnsdir Last Call review of -10 by Jim Reid (diff) Artart Last Call review of -10 by Arnt Gulbrandsen (diff) Dnsdir Telechat review of -11 by Jim Reid (diff) Artart Telechat review of -11 by Arnt Gulbrandsen (diff) Dnsdir Early review of -02 by Johan Stenstam (diff) Dnsdir Telechat review of -11 by Jim Reid (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jim Reid |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-add-resolver-info by DNS Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/gLkxEEWgrnswzAe-iWmuHcZQIP8 | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Almost ready | |
| Completed | 2024-03-15 |
review-ietf-add-resolver-info-11-dnsdir-telechat-reid-2024-03-15-00
The authors have resolved my earlier comments in the most recent version of the I-D. Thanks. I have almost nothing to add. The doc is just about complete and IMO does not need further substantive work. However the use of "or" in "(e.g., Extended Error Reporting [RFC8914] or encrypted DNS)" doesn't scan properly since the examples are part of a list. [Using "or" here seems to imply a binary choice.] I suppose fixing this can be left for the RFC Editor or the IETF Grammar/Style Police.