Last Call Review of draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-06
review-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2023-11-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2023-12-01
Requested 2023-11-09
Requested by David C Lawrence
Authors Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Dan Wing , Kevin Smith , Benjamin M. Schwartz
I-D last updated 2023-11-23
Completed reviews Intdir Last Call review of -06 by Bob Halley (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -06 by Anthony Somerset (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/sh8GrhzYHnk6V-1azkC6mh6jMb8
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-11-23
review-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2023-11-23-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document is
well written. I do not see any special operational or network management
related issue. Just I find the following text in the abstract is confusing to
me. "DNS clients that don't always use this resolver might wish to do so for
these domains." You may consider to make it clear.

Best,
Tianran