Last Call Review of draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14
review-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14-genart-lc-robles-2023-09-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14
Requested revision 14 (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-09-08
Requested 2023-08-08
Requested by Toerless Eckert
Authors Michael Richardson , Peter Van der Stok , Panos Kampanakis
I-D last updated 2023-09-06
Completed reviews Iotdir Last Call review of -14 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Mališa Vučinić (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Ines Robles (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -10 by Spencer Dawkins (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Mališa Vučinić (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Ines Robles (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -10 by Rich Salz (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -10 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Comments 
Requesting last-call review in preparation of finishing WGLC and to update/override the earlier review results, so as to accelerate following AD/IETF/IESG review. The authors confirmed that they resolved all issues raised in early reviews.

If feasible, request to re-assign document to prior reviewers:
OPSDIR: Jürgen Schönwälder
GENART: Ines Robles
SECDIR: Malisa Vucinic
IOTDIR: Russ Housley
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ia5XgkC0Q0fYyophifNIyZawII0
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 15)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2023-09-06
review-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14-genart-lc-robles-2023-09-06-00
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Document: draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2023-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document extends the work of Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key
Infrastructures (BRSKI) by replacing the Circuit-proxy between Pledge and
Registrar by a stateless/stateful constrained Join Proxy. This document defines
a protocol to securely assign a Pledge to a domain, represented by a Registrar,
using an intermediary node between Pledge and Registrar.

The document is well written.

There are 12 github issues open with this draft.
https://github.com/anima-wg/constrained-join-proxy/issues I understand that the
document is currently being modified to address them, I am willing to review
also the corrected version.

Thanks for this document,

Ines.