Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14
review-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14-opsdir-lc-zhou-2016-12-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-12-06
Requested 2016-11-23
Authors Matthew Kerwin
I-D last updated 2021-03-30 (Latest revision 2016-12-15)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -14 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-12-12
review-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14-opsdir-lc-zhou-2016-12-12-00
Hi Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14

Summary:
- This document specifies the file URI scheme.
- I do not see any specific operations or management aspects that need special
considerations. So from an OPS-DIR point of view, I think this doc is ready for
publication as RFC.

Editorial Comments:
In section 6, please expand the acronym LWP. Also better to expand API
(Application Programming Interface). Although the terms may be reasonably well
know, not everyone may know.

Regards,
Tianran