Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07
review-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2023-01-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-01-17
Requested 2023-01-03
Authors Dr. Bernard D. Aboba , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Colin Perkins
I-D last updated 2023-07-12 (Latest revision 2023-03-26)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Marc Blanchet (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Rich Salz (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -08 by Bernie Volz (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/-TB__xTB9yrK3hmysj7V6N3tpIc
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-01-13
review-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2023-01-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2023-01-13
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-17
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
comments than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
The abstract (scope) may be re-written more clearly (Section 1 Intro is clear).