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Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-06-17
Requested 2015-06-04
Authors Magnus Westerlund , Stephan Wenger
I-D last updated 2015-06-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-08.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015/06/25
IESG Telechat date: 2015/06/24

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC, 
but I do have one comment you may wish to consider.

Minor:
   I think it would be great if the document had a section indicating 
what has changed since RFC5117. Even listing just the new topologies 
would be very useful (e.g. Something that mentions that Sections 3.2, 
3.4, 3.7 and 3.10 are new topologies). That way somebody who is already 
familiar with RFC5117 can look at the new stuff right away.

Thanks
Suresh