Early Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller-11
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Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Early Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-11-10
Requested 2023-10-18
Requested by Stephane Litkowski
Authors Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Robert Raszuk , Dante Pacella , Arkadiy Gulko
I-D last updated 2023-11-06
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -11 by Darren Dukes (diff)
Genart Early review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/XX2kZ9oaF0zV8cCgdCo2nxO2TkE
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-11-06
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-controller-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2023-11-06
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-10
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
comments than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 21], Section 4.2, "recevied on"-->"received on" (twice)

-[Page 21], Section 4.3, "an Extented"-->"an Extended"