Early Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-05
review-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-05-rtgdir-early-zhang-2025-02-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2025-02-28
Requested 2025-02-12
Requested by Gunter Van de Velde
Authors Ketan Talaulikar , Syed Kamran Raza , Jorge Rabadan , Wen Lin
I-D last updated 2025-07-19 (Latest revision 2025-05-09)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Mallory Knodel (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Zheng Zhang (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Mališa Vučinić (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Comments 
Early review before initiating the IETF LC
Assignment Reviewer Zheng Zhang
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/OUzcxHozsf2kUCKOV9jlq5zJXjk
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-02-27
review-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-05-rtgdir-early-zhang-2025-02-27-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args/

Document: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-srv6-args-05
Reviewer: Zheng (Sandy) Zhang
Review Date: Feb 27th, 2025
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:
This draft is well written and clear.
No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Major issues: None.
Nits: None.

Comments:
The functionality defined in this document also applies to the transposition
scheme defined in RFC9252. It might be better to add a reference to RFC9252
Section 4 in the last paragraph of the first section. Since this draft applies
to route types 1 and 3, and the associated label is 3 octets, it is appropriate
to only apply 24 bits here to the transposition scheme. So it would be best to
add a sentence or two to the above.