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Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-10-18
Requested 2022-10-04
Authors Parag Jain , Ali Sajassi , Samer Salam , Sami Boutros , Greg Mirsky
I-D last updated 2022-10-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by Di Ma (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
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Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-10-07
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2022-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    Should the RDs in section 6.1 and 6.2 use example IP addresses instead of
    1.1.1.1 and 2.2.2.2?  (ID Nits called my attention to this, and I could not
    decide if it was important.  So it is a nit here.)