Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label-10
review-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label-10-genart-lc-housley-2023-06-30-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2023-07-12 | |
Requested | 2023-06-28 | |
Authors | Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Eric C. Rosen , Wen Lin , Zhenbin Li , IJsbrand Wijnands | |
I-D last updated | 2023-06-30 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -10
by Robert Sparks
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Menachem Dodge (diff) Genart Last Call review of -10 by Russ Housley (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Tony Przygienda (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/3fAtK3w0wRrSeNCGgzBnr86jTRU | |
Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Almost ready | |
Completed | 2023-06-30 |
review-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label-10-genart-lc-housley-2023-06-30-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label-10 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2023-06-30 IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-12 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: Section 2.2: Please provide more discussion of "central authority". I do not think that a Internet-wide authority is required to meet this requirement. I think that the authority needs to be recognized throughout a provider network. Nits: Section 1: please avoid splitting "I/S-PMSI" across multiple lines. Section 2: s/ingress PE's default label space/default label space/ Section 2: s/packet's ingress PE/ingress PE of the packet/ Section 2.2.2.1: s/Route-2 respectively/Route-2, respectively/ Section 3.2: s/PTA's Label field/label field of the PTA/ Section 3.2: s/source PE's label space/label space of the source PE/ Section 4: s/third party's label space/label space of a third party/ (2 places) Section 4: please spell out "LFIBs"; this term is not in the definitions.