Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10
review-ietf-bier-evpn-10-intdir-telechat-song-2023-11-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bier-evpn |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2023-11-23 | |
| Requested | 2023-11-04 | |
| Requested by | Éric Vyncke | |
| Authors | Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Tony Przygienda , Ali Sajassi , Jorge Rabadan | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-11-20 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Telechat review of -10
by Haoyu Song
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Mohit Sethi (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Himanshu C. Shah (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Haoyu Song |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-bier-evpn by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/5e-Tz_uIh0QXL80BLcE4-tgIhLQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 14) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2023-11-20 |
review-ietf-bier-evpn-10-intdir-telechat-song-2023-11-20-00
I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat the comments just like any other last call comments. I won't repeat the nits other reviewers have pointed out. Based on my general knowledge on BIER and EVPN, I think the document is ready for publication. I’m confused by the following grammar. Who deliver to whom? Please consider rephrasing to make it clearer. "For an inclusive PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes … For a selective PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver traffic to includes …"