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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10

Request Review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2023-11-23
Requested 2023-11-04
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Tony Przygienda , Ali Sajassi , Jorge Rabadan
I-D last updated 2023-11-20
Completed reviews Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Haoyu Song (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Mohit Sethi (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Himanshu C. Shah (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Haoyu Song
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-bier-evpn by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-11-20
I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat the comments
just like any other last call comments.

I won't repeat the nits other reviewers have pointed out. Based on my general
knowledge on BIER and EVPN, I think the document is ready for publication.

I’m confused by the following grammar. Who deliver to whom? Please consider
rephrasing to make it clearer. "For an inclusive PMSI, the set of BFERs to
deliver traffic to includes … For a selective PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver
traffic to includes …"