Last Call Review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04
review-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04-genart-lc-even-2021-02-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-02-16
Requested 2021-02-02
Authors Cyrus Daboo , Ken Murchison
I-D last updated 2021-08-04 (Latest revision 2021-03-03)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/lsucDep_p2JZWU_1ot4DyFXGCH8
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-02-15
review-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04-genart-lc-even-2021-02-15-00
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Document: draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2021-02-15
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. The structured-location is optional so if it is not specified for proximity
I assume that it implies current location?