Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17
review-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17-genart-lc-bryant-2024-02-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-03-01
Requested 2024-02-16
Authors Haomian Zheng , Italo Busi , Xufeng Liu , Sergio Belotti , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios
I-D last updated 2024-02-28
Completed reviews Secdir Telechat review of -18 by Watson Ladd
Opsdir Last Call review of -17 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -17 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -17 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -11 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -16 by Michael Richardson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/r5L1CouJMKRKikqgotvFDM9pBlk
Reviewed revision 17 (document currently at 18)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-02-28
review-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17-genart-lc-bryant-2024-02-28-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2024-02-28
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:From a GenArt perspective this draft is ready for publication. As per
other review comments I trust that a YANG expert has validated the YANG models.
There are a couple of minor nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
  == Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model' is defined on line
     3662, but no explicit reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4203' is defined on line 3684, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC7138' is defined on line 3698, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text