Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05
review-ietf-core-senml-etch-05-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2019-08-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-09-02
Requested 2019-08-19
Authors Ari Keränen , Mojan Mohajer
I-D last updated 2019-08-19
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -05 by Matthias Kovatsch (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
State Completed
Review review-ietf-core-senml-etch-05-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2019-08-19
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/_ts1RQmz1hXjfW9RmwdIoQPZG3E
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-08-19
review-ietf-core-senml-etch-05-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2019-08-19-00
Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05 as part of the
Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being
processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of
improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not
addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. 
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document is ready from an Ops Directorate viewpoint.