Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05
review-ietf-core-senml-etch-05-secdir-lc-huitema-2019-09-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2019-09-02
Requested 2019-08-19
Authors Ari Keränen , Mojan Mohajer
I-D last updated 2019-09-03
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -05 by Matthias Kovatsch (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christian Huitema
State Completed
Review review-ietf-core-senml-etch-05-secdir-lc-huitema-2019-09-03
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/9cTYUeFacn3kvibpg_gFJTOXKek
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-09-03
review-ietf-core-senml-etch-05-secdir-lc-huitema-2019-09-03-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

The draft draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05 defines new media types for the CoAP
iPATCH, PATCH, and FETCH methods for resources represented with the SenML data
model defined in RFC 8428.

The security considerations appropriately refer to the general considerations
of SenML.

The document is ready.