Telechat Review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11
review-ietf-detnet-architecture-11-tsvart-telechat-scharf-2019-02-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-detnet-architecture |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Transport Area Review Team (tsvart) | |
Deadline | 2019-02-19 | |
Requested | 2019-02-05 | |
Authors | Norman Finn , Pascal Thubert , Balazs Varga , János Farkas | |
I-D last updated | 2019-02-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08
by Henning Rogge
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Dan Harkins (diff) Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Michael Scharf (diff) Tsvart Telechat review of -11 by Michael Scharf (diff) Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Michael Scharf |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture by Transport Area Review Team Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 13) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2019-02-07 |
review-ietf-detnet-architecture-11-tsvart-telechat-scharf-2019-02-07-00
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review. This is a follow-up to my TSV-ART review of version of -08 of this document. I have read again version -11. The content of version -11 is a huge improvement. I'd like to thank the authors, the document shepherd, and the tech advisor (David Black) for addressing my main concerns. Michael