Telechat Review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2019-02-19
Requested 2019-02-05
Authors Norman Finn, Pascal Thubert, Balazs Varga, János Farkas
Draft last updated 2019-02-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -11 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Scharf
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-architecture-11-tsvart-telechat-scharf-2019-02-07
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-02-07


This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

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review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC if you reply to or forward this review.

This is a follow-up to my TSV-ART review of version of -08 of this document. I have read again version -11.

The content of version -11 is a huge improvement. I'd like to thank the authors, the document shepherd, and the tech advisor (David Black) for addressing my main concerns.