Telechat Review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11
review-ietf-detnet-architecture-11-tsvart-telechat-scharf-2019-02-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2019-02-19
Requested 2019-02-05
Authors Norman Finn , Pascal Thubert , Balazs Varga , János Farkas
I-D last updated 2019-02-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -11 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Scharf
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture by Transport Area Review Team Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-02-07
review-ietf-detnet-architecture-11-tsvart-telechat-scharf-2019-02-07-00
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.

This is a follow-up to my TSV-ART review of version of -08 of this document. I
have read again version -11.

The content of version -11 is a huge improvement. I'd like to thank the
authors, the document shepherd, and the tech advisor (David Black) for
addressing my main concerns.

Michael