Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04-genart-lc-campbell-2013-02-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-02-18
Requested 2013-02-07
Authors Gaurav Halwasia, Shwetha Bhandari, Wojciech Dec
Draft last updated 2013-02-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Shawn Emery (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04-genart-lc-campbell-2013-02-26
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-02-26

Review
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04-genart-lc-campbell-2013-02-26

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Document:  draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-02-25
IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-28
IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-28

Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- Header:

I ca't help but enjoy the fact that the file name is longer than the draft title :-)  (No change needed)

-- section 2, last paragraph:

s/"For e.g."/"For example,"