Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04-genart-lc-campbell-2013-02-26-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-02-18 | |
Requested | 2013-02-07 | |
Authors | Gaurav Halwasia , Shwetha Bhandari , Wojciech Dec | |
I-D last updated | 2013-02-26 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Ben Campbell
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Shawn M Emery (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Ben Campbell |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2013-02-26 |
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04-genart-lc-campbell-2013-02-26-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2013-02-25 IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-28 IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-28 Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- Header: I ca't help but enjoy the fact that the file name is longer than the draft title :-) (No change needed) -- section 2, last paragraph: s/"For e.g."/"For example,"