Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-
review-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-genart-lc-even-2012-01-01-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-01-03 | |
Requested | 2011-12-30 | |
Authors | Kim Kinnear , Mark Stapp , Richard A. Johnson | |
I-D last updated | 2012-01-01 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Roni Even
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by David Harrington |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2012-01-01 |
review-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-genart-lc-even-2012-01-01-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2012–1–1 IETF LC End Date: 2012–1–4 IESG Telechat date: 2012-1-5 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3.2 “ Type and VSS Information -- see Section 35” should be 3.5 2. In section 3.3 “ This sub-option only only” 3. In 3.5 last bullet not clear - “and the length of the MUST be 1.”