Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal-09
review-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-04-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-04-03
Requested 2013-03-21
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Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-04-04
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg08373.html
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
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Draft last updated 2013-04-04
Review completed: 2013-04-04

Review
review-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-04-04






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Document: draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal-09




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2013-04-03




IETF LC End Date: 2013-04-03




IESG Telechat date: N/A




 




Summary:




This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC but I do have some editorial comments.




 




Nits/editorial comments:




- Reading the abstract does not tell why these options are necessary. The 4th paragraph in Intro mentions the purpose of these options as well as Section 8.




Please consider adding a similar sentence as Section 8 to the abstract:




"The proposed extensions allow the signaling of new algorithm uptake in client code to allow zone administrators to know when it is possible to complete an algorithm rollover in a DNSSEC signed zone."




 




-[Page 4], last sentence: "in a potential future example". Suggestion: "in potential future examples".




 




-[Page 7], Section 9, [I-D.ietf-dnsext-rfc2671bis-edns0], latest version is 10.




 




Best Regards,




Meral




 




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