Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing-06
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Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-12-08
Requested 2014-11-28
Authors Stephen Morris , Johan Stenstam , John Dickinson , Matthijs Mekking
I-D last updated 2014-11-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
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Completed 2014-11-28
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing-06.txt
    DNSSEC Key Rollover Timing Considerations
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-November-2014
IETF LC End Date: 8-December-2014
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:


    It is unclear to this reader why in 3.2.1, 3.3.1, and 3.3.2 Iret is 


after Lzsk/Lksk ends, while in 3.2.2 Iret is before Lzsk, so as to 


ensure that Iret completes before Lksk retires.  I suspect that this is 


a reader issue rather than a correctness issue.




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