Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04
review-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-09-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-09-13 | |
| Requested | 2016-08-23 | |
| Authors | Stéphane Bortzmeyer , Shumon Huque | |
| I-D last updated | 2016-09-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Adam W. Montville (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Sheng Jiang (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2016-09-15 |
review-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-09-15-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2016-07-28 IETF LC End Date: 2016-07-29 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 2], "to the querier"--suggested-->"to the requester" -[Page 3], "subtrees etc)."----->"subtrees etc.)." -[Page 5], "have to forward"--->"has to forward" -[Page 6], "stop searching"--->"stops searching" -[Page 8-9], Ref "I-D.fujiwara-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse" to be updated. -General: would be best to spell out some of the acronyms (SOA, TLD, RR etc.). Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com