Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04
review-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-09-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-09-13
Requested 2016-08-23
Authors Stéphane Bortzmeyer, Shumon Huque
Draft last updated 2016-09-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Adam Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-09-15
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2016-09-15

Review
review-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-09-15






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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-03




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2016-07-28




IETF LC End Date:  2016-07-29




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.




 




Major issues:




Minor issues:




Nits/editorial comments:




 




-[Page 2], "to the querier"--suggested-->"to the requester"




-[Page 3], "subtrees etc)."----->"subtrees etc.)."




-[Page 5], "have to forward"--->"has to forward"




-[Page 6], "stop searching"--->"stops searching"




-[Page 8-9], Ref "I-D.fujiwara-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse" to be updated.




 




-General: would be best to spell out some of the acronyms (SOA, TLD, RR etc.).





 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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