Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10
review-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10-genart-lc-even-2022-10-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-10-19
Requested 2022-10-05
Authors Boris Makarenko , Vasily Dolmatov
I-D last updated 2022-10-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Mohit Sethi (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -10 by Jim Reid (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -12 by Scott Rose (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -13 by Jim Reid (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/KO6lPC4vPmg33Bamkw5B3h7gu1Y
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 14)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2022-10-13
review-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10-genart-lc-even-2022-10-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2022-10-13
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
the document is almost ready for publication as some type of an RFC

Major issues:
The document is meant to be an informational RFC obsoleting RFC5933 a standard
track RFC. why is this change.

Minor issues:

the directive in the IANA consideration   "The entry for Value 3, GOST R
34.11-94 should be updated to have its Status changed to '-'" is not clear.
there is no status field in the table as I see in RFC8624 section 3.3

Nits/editorial comments: