Skip to main content

Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-zoneversion-02
review-ietf-dnsop-zoneversion-02-dnsdir-lc-leymann-2023-07-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-zoneversion
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2023-07-17
Requested 2023-07-04
Requested by Tim Wicinski
Authors Hugo Salgado , Mauricio Vergara Ereche , Duane Wessels
I-D last updated 2023-07-25
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -02 by Nicolai Leymann (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Nicolai Leymann
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-zoneversion by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/rHBhcwhSU_xnojYprnV1iEOnamo
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-07-25
review-ietf-dnsop-zoneversion-02-dnsdir-lc-leymann-2023-07-25-00
I am the designated DNS Directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-zoneversion.
The draft is well written and defines an EDNS option which can be used for
debugging purposes.

In general I think the draft is ready for publication.

Nits:
During the WGLC there were a some discussions on the -02 version of the
document to clarify a few details in wording. I have not seen any update to the
document and it might be useful to check if those comments need to be addressed.

The size of an "unsigned decimal integer" is not defined (see rfc6891).

It might be useful to extend some of the abbrevation if they are used the first
time (e.g., meaning of RR, SOA, ... depends on context).