Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11
review-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11-genart-lc-schinazi-2020-10-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-11-12
Requested 2020-10-29
Authors Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Mohamed Boucadair , Jon Shallow
I-D last updated 2021-12-09 (Latest revision 2021-05-27)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -11 by Ebben Aries (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by David Schinazi (diff)
Artart Telechat review of -14 by Sean Turner
Assignment Reviewer David Schinazi
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Q8fWAPkznaQYQOQSyksM0dlfZ4s
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready
Completed 2020-10-30
review-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11-genart-lc-schinazi-2020-10-30-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2020-10-30
IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Thanks for a clear document, I didn't see any issues from a GenART perspective.

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