Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location-08
review-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location-08-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2014-03-20-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2014-03-25 | |
Requested | 2014-02-17 | |
Authors | Hannes Tschofenig , Henning Schulzrinne , Dr. Bernard D. Aboba | |
I-D last updated | 2014-03-20 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Brian Weis (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Bert Wijnen (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Bert Wijnen |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2014-03-20 |
review-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location-08-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2014-03-20-00
Sorry to be late (the deadline was 28 feb 2014). But in case this is still useful, here it is. In general I think the doc is ready for publication. I do not see any operational or network management impacts. I do see (specifcally on page 10 and 11) some abbreviations that could possibly be extended (on their first use) so that new readers understand what they mean from the first read. These are abbreviations like NENA VESA VPC ERDB Bert