Last Call Review of draft-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-03
review-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-03-genart-lc-enghardt-2023-01-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-01-23
Requested 2023-01-09
Authors Martin Duke
I-D last updated 2023-01-16
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -03 by Scott Hollenbeck (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Reese Enghardt (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -03 by Dr. Bernard D. Aboba (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Reese Enghardt
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-01-16
review-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-03-genart-lc-enghardt-2023-01-16-00
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Document: draft-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-03
Reviewer: Reese Enghardt
Review Date: 2023-01-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-23
IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-02

Summary: This document is clear and concise. It is almost ready for
publication, just one minor issue.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues:

In Section 5.1:

"Some organizations might not
   be deterred in either case, while others might now find such an
   attack to not be feasible."
As the cost of the attack decreases, should the "not" be removed in the second
part here, so it'll read "others might now find such an attach to be feasible"?

Nits/editorial comments: None.