Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05

Request Review of draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-25
Requested 2013-01-17
Authors Andy Bierman, Dan Romascanu, Juergen Quittek, Mouli Chandramouli
Draft last updated 2013-01-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Brian Carpenter
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05-genart-lc-carpenter-2013-01-19
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-01-19


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Document: draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2013-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25
IESG Telechat date: 

Summary:  Ready (nits)


I didn't find any mention of a MIB Doctor review in the tracker. Since two
authors are MIB Doctors, it should be OK.

I did not review the details of the MIB module.


In the Abstract, "This document specifies version of the Entity MIB"
seems to lack a "4".

I would have expected a short paragraph starting "Version 4 of this MIB
addresses new requirements... " just before section 2.1.