Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05
review-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05-genart-lc-carpenter-2013-01-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-01-25 | |
| Requested | 2013-01-17 | |
| Authors | Andy Bierman , Dan Romascanu , Juergen Quittek , Mouli Chandramouli | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-01-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Brian E. Carpenter
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Brian E. Carpenter Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Vincent Roca (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2013-01-19 |
review-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05-genart-lc-carpenter-2013-01-19-00
Please see attached review.
Brian
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2013-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: Ready (nits)
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Comment:
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I didn't find any mention of a MIB Doctor review in the tracker. Since two
authors are MIB Doctors, it should be OK.
I did not review the details of the MIB module.
Nits:
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In the Abstract, "This document specifies version of the Entity MIB"
seems to lack a "4".
I would have expected a short paragraph starting "Version 4 of this MIB
addresses new requirements... " just before section 2.1.