Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04
review-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04-artart-lc-mahoney-2022-11-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2022-11-03
Requested 2022-10-20
Authors Mark Nottingham , Erik Wilde , Sanjay Dalal
I-D last updated 2022-11-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -04 by Jean Mahoney (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jean Mahoney
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/hClWHdKLBg1DEJ7i8MuQ_c7UzyE
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-11-03
review-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04-artart-lc-mahoney-2022-11-03-00
This document is ready to be published as an RFC. 

Nits:

General - RFC7807 / RFC 7807 (when used in prose)

Section 3.1.3 - The entire section is bold in the HTML output.

   Current:  The "title" string is advisory, and is included only 
             for users who both are not aware of ...

   Perhaps: The "title" string is advisory and is included only 
            for users who are both unaware of ...

Section 3.2 - a "errors" extension / an "errors" extension

Section 7 - IANA prefers that a registry name not include "Registry" 

Current: "HTTP Problem Types Registry"

Perhaps: "HTTP Problem Types" registry