Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cice-01
review-ietf-httpbis-cice-01-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cice
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-08-04
Requested 2015-07-23
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Tom Taylor
Review review-ietf-httpbis-cice-01-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-03
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg12015.html
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2015-08-03
Review completed: 2015-08-03

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review-ietf-httpbis-cice-01-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-03

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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-cice-01
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 2015-08-03
IETF LC End Date: 2015-08-04
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Summary: Ready with one nit.

Major issues:

Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments: The draft header and Abstract should indicate 


that it updates RFC 7231.