Telechat Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03
review-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-10-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-09
Requested 2018-09-28
Authors Craig Pratt , Darshak Thakore , Barbara Stark
I-D last updated 2018-10-11
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-10-11
review-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-10-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-10-08
IETF LC End Date: NA
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-12

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental Track RFC .

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 5], "accessable"--->"accessible"
-[Page 5], "providing a"---->"providing an"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com